Here is a different, simplified version of the script that I edited together. I think it might work better and is more realistic in terms of actors / filming. Jake is still a ghost although that is not the main point of the film.
I’ve adopted Ben’s idea for the voice over (after our pre-production meeting and test shoot last week) and I hope it works well. I also think in this version we need less characters and might not need the tracking shot of the posters – though I have a version of it with the posters too if we need it.